Edit with me #1.
This week, my student Pat sent me a page of her historical novel.
She especially wanted help with dialogue between more than two characters and adding tension to a scene.
I edited it the way I would have, if this was my book. And then shared the reasons for all the changes I made.
I hope you find this helpful.
As long as people are interested in these, I’ll do one every week. If you’d like me to edit a page for you, join the Ninja Writers Club at http://www.ninjawriters.org. Then send a page of your book to shaunta@ninjawriters.org with ’Youtube Edit’ in the subject line.